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Review on πŸ”’ Exclusive Collector's Edition: Celebrating 20 Years of POWER IN THE BLOOD (1) (John Jordan Mystery) by Robert Ryokan

Revainrating 3 out of 5

The output has been revised but contains a glaring error

Because the author states that this edition is a rewrite, he has had ample opportunity to correct typos and wording errors, as well as to rewrite a plot error that occurs right in the middle of the plot climax. Spoiler alert: anyone who was close to the 1980s AIDS epidemic understands the incubation period and the time it takes to diagnose the absence of HIV infection. The ending doesn't fit. If it weren't for that, I would have given it a 4 due to a number of typos and poor word choice that prevented it from getting a 5. I will read the next part of the series and hope for a 5.

Pros
  • in the plot. Just unbelievable!
Cons
  • Not bad, but...